
It’s a paper moon in a darling’s tomb
On the wallpaper in the green-lit gloom
There a swallow-tail with a robin’s breast
Speaks an omen of a tailor dressed
In a silk-hat heavy on his balding pate
A dark coat collared, the pants of slate
Graveyard shoes that steal starlight
An iron key balanced and held upright.
Off he flew from the paper moon
Left a keyhole remark like an empty tune
Sung by a voice in the gloaming mist
Heard by a tailor holding in one fist
Secrets stitched by a loveless hand
On a flightless bird o’er a clouded land.
Written for Lillian's dVerse "Let Your Words Be Your Paintbrush!"; write an ekphrastic poem using one of four Catrin Welz-Stein images. Click Mr. Linky to read more and join in!
The rhyming is especially beautiful.
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Thank you, RW. 🙂
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Loved the atmosphere Dora.
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Thank you, Tannille!
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Has the ring of a legend to it. Wonderful wordsmithing, Dora!
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Aww thanks, Lisa! Lovely compliments. 🙂
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You are very welcome.
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Such a dreamy gorgeous rhythm.
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Oh thank you, Jude! 🙂
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My pleasure 🌼
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Wow! 💚 this is perfect!
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So glad you liked it! Thank you, K. L. 😊
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You’re so welcome! 💚
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Beautifully rhymed! I love the tale you tell here….most especially I liked these words
“Graveyard shoes that steal starlight”
and”
“Left a keyhole remark like an empty tune”
Well done!
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I appreciate the kind words, Lillian. Thank you!
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There’s a deep melancholy in this poem, rocked by the lullaby rhythm, I can’t help thinking of a dead child and the sadness trapped in the room.
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Very perceptive of you, Jane. A nursery was in my mind as the poem ran along and your catching that is particularly rewarding to me. Thank you for your comment. 🙂
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I’m pleased I caught some of the right impressions 🙂
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There’s such rhyming beauty in this melancholy tale. I also thought a dead child–for some reason, I went to Abraham Lincoln’s son, or something nineteenth-century.
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Thank you, Merril. There is a rather depressed 19th-century air to it all, and I did try to alleviate it with the rhymes, but the other-worldy quality of grief kept coming through.
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Sometimes you have to let the muse do what she wants to do. 😀
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Agreed 🙂
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I love the rhythm and rhyme… especially with all its darkness it still has this kine and friendly tone it comes through even stronger
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Thanks for the kind comments, Björn. They are very much appreciated.
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Like an old ballad– well suited to the image. (K)
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Lovely compliment, thank you, K 🙂
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LOVE this! such a dreamy quality, almost like a song. Excellent rhyming.
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Oh so glad you enjoyed it, Purple Pen 🙂 Thank you kindly for your generous comments.
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kaykuala
Wonderful writing and correspondingly perfect rhyming, Dora!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank, for reading and for the appreciative comment. 😀
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Love this 😀
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Thank you much, Anita! 😀
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That’s lovelyy💙
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Thanks very much, Akshita. Most appreciated.
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Your most welcome, it was a great pleasure 🤗🤗💙💙💙
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You took all the images and made magic!
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Your comment is magic to me, thanks so much, Jules 🙂
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so sad..loveless hand and a flightless bird
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The sadness just crept in. Thanks for reading and commenting, Larry!
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lovely, lilting verse! I love the picture too. So mystical!
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Thank you so much, Tricia! 🙂
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This is a great poem! Not sure how I missed it back then. Love the images and descriptions as the story unfolds.
Graveyard shoes that steal starlight … they must be well shined!!
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Ha, yes! Thanks for reading, Dwight. I appreciate your comments very much.
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