Once, a child alone when October came
I hear his footsteps just in the next room
and when I rush to see him there
he wasn’t there. He was everywhere.
Much later I cross a river, climb the embankment
of trees, upwards to the plains, dry and dusty
their breath, until I choke, my breath raw
diseased, my bones on fire, the pain rasping
pits of agony, feet twisted into unnatural screws.
He stands clothed like a burning bush in wilderness
autumn’s cloak across the mountaintop
a fire unnatural, burning yet not burning
for blind eyes to see, deaf ears to hear, “I AM.”
Now as another October comes
I feel him near, the warmth of his presence
a river running through the weatherized
windows and doors, invisibly clear.
I know this darkness before light
I know this voice before sound
I know this death in life
where bush burns but is not consumed.
I wait.
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Oh, this stanza made me tear up a bit:
“I know this darkness before light
I know this voice before sound
I know this death in life
where bush burns but is not consumed.”
This whole piece is so stunning and powerful. Another brilliant work, Dora. This is incredibly visceral.
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Totally overwhelmed by your kind response, Lucy. Thank you so much 🙏😊
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This is a wonderful poem Dora! Your imagery of the Great I Am is so vivid and real. The trees of autumn across the hills like a burning bush announcing. “Here I Am!!”
Well done!
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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😊
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This is so beautiful and comforting – a river within and through our lives which protects us and is always there!
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Thanks, Ingrid, for that lovely encapsulation some of the poem’s sentiments. 🙂
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I know, I know, I know that penultimate stanza, the fire and the consumed but unburnt bush…Yes.
Very well done!
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Thank you, Ron 😀
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I like the trajectory of this poem, as faith builds and flows. The contrasts are beautiful in the final stanza.
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful imagery, touching all the senses. (K)
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Thank you, K.
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Beautiful, visceral images, Dora!
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Many thanks, Merril 😀
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You’re welcome!
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This poem is lush with autumnal themes – colors and deaths. I love the personification of his voice and darkness. This is beautifully done 🙂
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Grateful for your generous compliment and reading, Grace. Thank you! 🙂
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I love the softness of your poem… a beautiful way of dying with all that fire… before plunging into darkness.
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The “knowing” of the uncanny, as much as is revealed, makes all the difference. Thank you so much for your kind comments, Björn. I hadn’t thought about that poetic quality of softness in poetry. Must explore this thought more. 🙂
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This is beautiful, you really know how to play with words!
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🙂Thank you so much, Elizabeth. I had to reach for this one!
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This was so lovely Dora that it gave me goosebumps! The imagery was vivid and beautiful 🥰
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Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!🙏 😊
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My pleasure ☺️
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Beautiful and descriptive poem, Dora😊🎃
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Aww, thank you, Susan 🧡🧡
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October always has a unique vibe, you captured it well D !
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Thanks so much, Tannille.
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Wow, beautiful prose Dora😊 excellent!
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Thank you so much, Candy! 🥰
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Always Dora ❤
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I will wait with you if you don’t mind.
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Yes, together 🙏🙂
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“I know this darkness before light
I know this voice before sound
I know this death in life
where bush burns but is not consumed.”
This stanza gives me goosebumps. Such faith. Such devotion. Thank you for this.
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Glory be to God who by His great love for us gives us the faith! 💖Thanks so much for reading.
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amen ❤
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delightfully divine!
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Thank you!
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What a lovely poem. Well done. 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you. 🙂
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