
It was my walk you were on
hunting caterpillars, spiders and ants:
cicindela sexguttata, tiger beetle
after its prey in a flashy fluorescent kind of way
I stopped, you froze, neither of us camouflaged,
me turmeric topped in white jeans,
you in green metallic sheen
me on all fours to examine you better
you on all sixes to beat it if you had to
I exited stage left, you stayed put, focused,
a cirque du soleil wanderer, stray spotlight hoarder
ready to celebrate with a juicy meal
of tang-colored butterfly puddling nearby
When comic relief: a crow flaps its wings
while you race for your prey but your timing is late,
the butterfly flutters off and I shout off the bird
and you meander onward, a green blaze of disgust.
Join the dVerse poets as we write on "Creepies and Crawlies," for Poetics Tuesday.
Dora, I love how you injected yourself into the ecosystem and rattled the food chain.
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Haha! Rattling chains is what I’m all about. Now why does that make me think of Halloween? Thanks, Lisa.
pax,
dora
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Luv the curiosity on both sides of this encounter
Much💖love
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All’s well…but everybody goes home hungry, eh? How sad. Nicely told, Dora.
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very cute!
– that was my favorite line, hands down, Dora!
❤
David
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I have loved observing your observation of this buggy drama. I like how you picture yourself as just another one of the colorful crowd.
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love the eco balance in this, predators up and down the chain, well written Dora!
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The parallel lines in stanza two are captivating. Love the tumeric top and the vividness of your encounter.
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Nice sounding line: “after its prey in a flashy fluorescent kind of way”
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I love the parallel perspectives of beetle and observer, Dora. And your imagery is exquisite:
‘a cirque du soleil wanderer, stray spotlight hoarder’
We have some scarab beetles here that are truly beautiful, even if they feed on dung!
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You did a Maradona—the hand of God!
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What a wonderful moment so perfectly described, Dora! The cirque de soleil beetle, you, the curious human, a nearby watchful crow – a fabulous jostle of food chain antics! 🙂
I love that you got on all fours to examine it better, and i also enjoyed its disgust at the end 🙂
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I love the humor in your poem Dora. What a beautiful beetle! I liked the hoarding the sunshine line. Some just don’t appreciate your help no matter what you do!
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Snagglepuss would love the stage directions! I was delighted by the notion that an insect feels disgust!
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Rather a prima dona of a beetle! Thank you.
pax,
dora
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Nice story here….and these words ” a juicy meal
of tang-colored butterfly puddling nearby” — detailed for sure!
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What an encounter, Dora! Maybe the turmeric top disgusted it, eh! 😄
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I love the broken chains of eating or be eaten… as usual the human comes out on top.
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A cartoonish imagination you have! I saw a frog once grab one these beetles to eat and abruptly spit it out while wiping his tongue in disgust. As for frogs, they say, “no thanks!”. LOL
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Heh. Born and raised with cartoons I was. It occurred to me that the fluorescent coloring was meant as a dietary warning ⚠️ but too lazy to do the research. 😜Can’t wait to see what you’ve written… but I suspect hilarity!
pax,
dora
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Well, thanks but this time it’s more of a defensive piece of creepie crawlies. LOL
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Loved it! 😀
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❤😊
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Wow I have never seen that bug before
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It’s quite the showstopper, common on wooded trails in spring, probably because it’s just come out of hibernation.🙂
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😮
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I love this Dora. Also, can you please contact me at [email]? I have a question for you. Thank you.
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Grace,
Thank you so much. I’m delighted you liked it! Of course, I’ll drop you a note shortly.
pax,
dora
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