
Don’t fall away
Turn from lies
With Jesus stay
Embattled, your nerves fray
Deceiving half-truth with faith vies:
Caboodles of falsehoods the serpent will say
Peace bereft, you say you can’t pray
All night in darkness your hope dies
Thinking you’re lost forever to Day
Call to Christ though skies seem gray
Your guilt he knows, hears your cries
Hung on a cross, your sins to pay
Your enemy slay!
Resist, despise!
Don’t fall away
With Jesus stay
Rhyme scheme: aba,aba, aba, aba, abaa in semi-villanelle fashion
Sammi's WWP #229: "caboodle" in exactly 78 words
Eugi's Weekly Prompt: "Peace"
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Love these words ❤
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Thank you so much, Anita. 🥰
pax,
dora
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Marvelous!
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Thank you, Jon. My friend Julie has been tried recently with long sickness and the death of her husband, now enduring spiritual attack. Would covet your prayers for her.
pax,
dora
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I would be happy to pray, especially that Jehovah Raphah would evict the sickness and bring newfound faith in Him. Incidentally, Raphah, meaning “to heal” is a Hebrew verb. Let us look for action!
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Thank you, Jon. Jehovah Raphah: only He can bind up our wounds. Blessed be His Name!
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Sister, I have no idea who Julie is but your love and care is evident. “Caboodles of falsehoods the serpent will say” how true. So blessed and thankful by the way God has gifted you with words!!! 🤗🤗🧡🧡
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So sweet of you, Mandy. 💖 I don’t feel at all poetic and messed up quite a bit with the form but your encouraging words reassure me that at least I got my sentiments across. My friend Julie has been tried recently with long sickness and the death of her husband, now enduring spiritual attack. Would covet your prayers for her.
pax,
dora
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Sister, I have been praying for her just not by name! In my email to you I asked how she was doing but didn’t want to be rude/pry so I deleted it. I will def pray for Julie by name now. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Thank you so very much Mandy. Will catch up with your email. Praying you and your family have a blessed Lord’s Day. 🙏🧡🍃🍁
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You too, Dora!!! 🤗🤗😘😘
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Such a heartfelt and touching piece, Dora! Sending prayers for your friend, Julie. ❤️
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Thank you for your prayers, Eugi. They are so very much appreciated. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Dora.
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This encouraged me to continue even as one feels embattled
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Thankful for that. Praise God!
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God bless you Dora
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And you, brother. Christ has come, Christ is risen, Christ will come again. Hallelujah!
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Hallelujah!
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Only a dear friend could have written so movingly! Sending my prayers for Julie, Dora. 🙏🏼
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Thank you, Punam, your thoughts are much appreciated. ❤️
pax,
dora
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You are welcome. ❤️
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Dora,
The cadence worked beautifully. I hope your advice is taken!
Darn good words.
Peace,
Susan
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Thank you, Susan. ❤️
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Sometimes it’s easy to believe God has forsaken you, especially in these troubled times. Hopefully, your message will be heeded.
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Keith,
I hope so too. With God nothing is impossible.
pax,
dora
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Yes, beware “caboodles of falsehoods” from serpents forked tongue…
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Lynn,
We lull ourselves into a false sense is security when we don’t.
pax,
dora
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peace to you, Dora
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Thank you. 🙏❤️
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Beautiful lines
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Kind of you, thanks so much Annette.
pax,
dora
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You’re welcome.
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Love this, Dora ❤️
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Thank you, Teresa. ❤️
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this is full of faith and hope. a blessed one.
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Thank you. “God is our refuge and strength, an ever-present help in trouble. Therefore we will not fear…” (Ps. 46: 1-2)
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