Unlooked for.
You were unlooked for.
Unhoped for.
You were unhoped for.
Where I was
You were not.
Where You were
I was not.
Sudden. Then.
It was sudden.
Not the shuddering
of wings, not of swan.
Angels watched.
Unwatched for.
What are you looking at?
Put ‘em back, your hallelujahs.
Because I’m a mess.
A blubbering mess.
Mess of sticky goo, sin.
Call it what you will.
It was painful, this birth.
This death. At twenty.
A resurrection in You.
In You. In You. In You.
I can’t get over You.
I can’t get over You.
You know me through and through.
You know me through and through.
You swaddled me
not in a manger.
You fed me at Your breast
Your Holy Spirit milk.
You hid me in Egypt.
You found me at Jacob’s well.
You suffer me a cross to bear
You bore it as well. For me. For me.
You birthed me. You loved me.
It’s not a fluke of biology
this Light as in Damascus.
This Love, this Light, this manger
this cross, this thorny crown
this night, this life over which
this darkness cannot roll.
This Love is Light is mine.
In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God. He was in the beginning with God. All things were made through him, and without him was not any thing made that was made. In him was life, and the life was the light of men. The light shines in the darkness, and the darkness has not overcome it. … The true light, which gives light to everyone, was coming into the world. He was in the world, and the world was made through him, yet the world did not know him. He came to his own, and his own people did not receive him. But to all who did receive him, who believed in his name, he gave the right to become children of God, who were born, not of blood nor of the will of the flesh nor of the will of man, but of God.
John 1:1-5, 9-13
Grace at dVerse asks us to write either in the form of Kwansaba or write a poem of blessing or praise in the style of David Whyte. Click on Mr. Linky and join us for the last meeting of 2021 at the dVerse bar. Image credit: Photo by Andre Moura from pexels
The way you used repetition was really, really powerful going from one thought and then the opposite. Holy Spirit milk was intense imagery and I am glad you didn’t shy away from writing it! I am so thankful for the Light of the World. Love, hugs and blessings!!!
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Thank you, Mandy! I really appreciate that. Love and blessings, my friend, ♥️🎄♥️🎄
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Wonderful poem of praise, Dora. I feel the passion of your praise ❤
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Thank you, Lisa. I’m so glad you liked it. Merry Christmas, my friend. 🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄♥️
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You’re very welcome and wishing you Merry Christmas also ❤
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Thank you! 🙂
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I love how your repetitions showed the passion in faith, I also love that you bring out the complexity, not just love but pain and that cross to bear.
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There is a complexity, a mystery, but that’s all a part of it and I’m glad that came across. Thank you as always for your thoughtful comments, my friend. Wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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a delightful sincere testament to your unshakable faith, really lovely Dora!
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Thank you. Merry Christmas, Kate.
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and you!
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I like how your poem starts with unlooked for and unhoped for thoughts to the testimony in the last line: “This Love is Light is mine.”
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Thank you, Frank. Have a blessed Christmas, my friend. 🙂
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This is such a passionate write, Dora! The use of repetition here works so well! 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa. Merry Christmas! 🎄
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I agree, the repetition echoes the sentiments of faith and love.
Reading this gave me goosebumps which is a testament to your firm rousing belief in Him.
And that ending line is perfect conclution: This Love is Light is mine.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year Dora.
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Thank you so much, Grace. I’m so glad you liked it. Merry Christmas to you too and a wonderful New Year! 🙂🎄♥️
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How beautiful and touching and true and tearing…Bless you Dora! 🙂
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Thank you, Pat. Blessings for a wonderful Christmas, my friend. 🙂🎄
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Oh my! Gorgeous write. Wonderful. Happiest of holidays to you and yours my friend, and every blessing in the new year Dora! 🙂
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Thank you, Rob. Happy holidays and a blessed New Year to you as well! 🙂
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Man, you tripled down on the reason for the season, and it rattles the windows and raises the roof for sure. I believe God is within all of us. The answer to most of life’s problems is an inside job.
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I did, didn’t I? Thank you for your wonderfully encouraging comments, Glenn. Happy holidays and blessings galore! 🙂
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I never expect anything but greatness from your pen, Dora. How lovely you are. Thanks so much. Always stops my breath and infuses me with new light. Love it all.
And the Bible part. Yes!
Merry Christmas, dear Poetess! You’re the bestest!!
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Thank you so much for your always sweet and generous comments, Selma. What kindness, my friend. Here’s hoping you have a wonderful Christmas and New Year! God bless you.
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That was so stunning and intense! My hat is off to you! 🙂
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Thank you, Lucy! Enjoy the holidays! 🙂
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Praise to the One who is Love and Light and Life!
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Amen! He is greatly to be praised! Many blessings for a wonderful Christmas and New Year, my friend.
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A great poem Dora…. and one of my favorite passages!
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Mine too! One of the most exquisite passages in the Bible, and just gets richer each time we read it. I’m glad you liked my poem. 🙂
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Yes,,,
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I like the way the words roll and double back, come forward and hesitate before forging ahead, like waves on a beach.
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Thank you, Shay. It had a very natural feel while I was writing. And I didn’t try to hold back the tide. 🙂 Hope your holidays are full of blessing and the new year, my friend!
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Pssst, Dora….I am hosting at The Sunday Muse today and tomorrow. I hope you’ll be able to join us!
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You’re a treasure, Shay. Can’t wait to see what you’ve got to spark the “Sunday Muse”!
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The repetition and rhythm is truly effective and inspiring.
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Thank you for your generous comment. Happy holidays to you!
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My words of praise for this poem will never be adequate enough to describe how it impacted me. Wishing you Holiday peace and contentment,
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Same to you, my friend. Thank you for your kindness on this platform year in and year out, Helen. Blessings and peace.
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His Word is a love story and it’s a story about each one of us! We praise his prose! Merry Christmas, friend! 🎄
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It is a love story of amazing grace, how blessed we are to possess it and to live it! Thank you, Tricia, and Merry Christmas to you too, my friend! ♥️🎄🙂♥️
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Dora — May the joy of the season fill your heart here at the closing if the year 2021, and may peace abide in 2022. This is a most difficult time for our planet earth, and a time of turmoil for its peoples. May 2022 begin the way back! ✌🏼❤️🌎
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Amen, Rob. Peace and joy abide with you, my friend, now and in the new year. 🕊♥️
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This is so intense as Mandy said! (Thought of that even before I saw Mandy’s comment). Makes me appreciate and refliect on the Human side of Christ’s incarnation
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It was an intense write. And I’m so glad pondering on the incarnation was its effect. Praise God!
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Thank you for the effort into this!!!
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You’re so kind, Jimmy. Hope you and your family have a good day today!
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💙💚💙💚
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We read the same verses this morning, so enriching. The poem is full of unconditional love.
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Well done! God’s Word flows through these verses with your unique touch of expression. Blessings Dora and Merry Christmas!
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Thank you, Richard, and may the blessings of the Christmas season abound to you and yours!
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Dora, your passion and faith shine through your words! Beautiful write. ❤️
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, my friend.
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Aww thank you, Punam. Wishing you the same, and blessings to you and your loved ones. ❤️💛♥️💚
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You are welcome and thank you. 💖
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