Genre: Poetry; Word Count: 100
Threads torn from a silk tapestry
a nightingale on branch of tree
Belong in other songs and rhymes
Of emperors with preternatural pastimes.
I pick my threads from a homespun quilt
Of gospel truth that frees from guilt.
It tells of One who died and rose
To save from sins and lies expose.
It warns that wealth hoarded in greed
Should be shared with those in need.
Here I sit under branch and sky
Little to my name, just this tune to ply.
At the end of my days, I’ve nothing to grieve:
it’s better to give than to receive.
Acts 20:35 NIV
[Paul said,] “In everything I did, I showed you that by this kind of hard work we must help the weak,
remembering the words the Lord Jesus himself said:
‘It is more blessed to give than to receive.'”
Three prompts spurred my writing today: Rochelle's Friday Fictioneers photo prompt (Image credit © Bill Reynolds); Sammi's Day 7 ("Preternatural Pastimes") of 13 Days of Samhain; and Denise's Six Sentence Story ("Branch").
Wonderful, Dora.
You sing a song for the ages!
~ ❤ Susan
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Thank you Susan. ❤️
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Nice lines:
“I pick my threads from a homespun quilt
Of gospel truth that frees from guilt.”
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Oh I’m glad you liked those! Thank you Frank.
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Thanks. I needed that,
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So glad, Bob. Thank you.
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You’re going against the grain of our current society, I think. But then, true people of faith always have. May I GIVE you a round of applause for these couplets, my friend? 😉
–Shay
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Blessed to RECEIVE too, my friend. Thank you. ❤️🙂
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A beautiful poem Dora.
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Thank you Sadje 🙂
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You’re welcome my friend
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❤️🙂
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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A beautiful song, i have proven the worth of giving over receiving often.
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Thank you Mimi.
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I marvel at your poetic soul.
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I’m undeserving of such a generous compliment, Jon, but thank you so much, and may it be only to the glory of God.
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Brava, Dora! Well-woven truth. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Can’t tell you happy it makes me to get a “Brava!” from you. Thank you!
Aleichem Shalom,
Dora
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The words ‘Give, and it shall be given unto you’ also came to mind when reading your lovely poem Dora.
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Thank you Keith, and especially for reminding me of Luke 6:38, which is worth quoting in its entirety because its promise is even more fulsome: “Give, and it will be given to you. A good measure, pressed down, shaken together and running over, will be poured into your lap. For with the measure you use, it will be measured to you.” Amazing truth, amazing grace.
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I must confess I’d forgotten how the verse continued, so thank you for reminding me!
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Wonderful, Dora! An important message wrapped in beautiful words 🙂
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Thank you so much, Sammi 🙂
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lovely
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Thank you, UP! 🙂
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An amazing truth beautifully written, Dora 🙂 It’s great to see you again.
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Adele, Thanks so much for the comment. It’s great to join in with the FF’s again! ❤️
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Oh this is a nice little moment.
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Thanks for reading, Laurie.
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I can imagine you sitting with a guitar singing. Beautiful words D.
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Thanks so much, T. 🙂
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what a beautiful poem. thanks for sharing.
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Thank you Plaridel.
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Inspired poetry. May we all live our lives in such a way that there is nothing to grieve about at the end.
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Amen!
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A beautiful poem, Dora. I loved the ending. 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you, Brenda. 🙂
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Excellent poetry, wonderful truth. I loved
“I pick my threads from a homespun quilt
Of gospel truth that frees from guilt.”
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Thank you so much, Linda!
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A wonderful song that reaches deep into my heart.
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That’s music to my ears. Thank you James.
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Nice use of cloth and threads as metaphor. Good message also, Dora!
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Glad you liked it. Thank you Lisa! 🙂
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You’re very welcome, Dora ❤
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Lovely piece, Dora. If only everyone knew the magic that can happen – it truly is better to give than receive.
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Thank you Denise. We hesitate many times thinking how it will be received, and we miss out on this very precious joy.
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What a bibilcal song!
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Glad you liked it!
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